My mother is very pretty, and she has a beautiful face. The first thing that you notice when you see my mother is her shoulder-length, auburn straight shiny hair which highlights her beautiful, small, pale face. When you come close to her you can smell the smell of the flowers in summer. Close to her you can see that She has shapely brown eyebrows, and also very long wonderful eyelashes. However, the loveliest thing on her face are her pale blue eyes which are as blue as tropical water. Below her eyes there is a very small cute nose, and beside her nose there are two pretty little cheekbones, and when she smiles her cheeks become all round, and it's very cute. Under her nose, my mother has a little mouth with beautiful lips as red as a raspberry. My mother has a beautiful and sweet voice. It sounds like a melody to my ears. In short, all of these things together make my mother beautiful.
You mom looks good like you! It is like your own description!
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely description of your mom! I really like that you used all of your senses to create the description. I really feel that I have a clear picture in my mind of your beautiful mother.
ReplyDeleteCHECK; ...ARE her pale, blue eyes.
CHECK: put commas between adjectives that you list in a description.
beautiful,small, pale face.